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...But you Did

You told me that you loved me
You said you'd always be there
You told me we'd be alright
You said that you really did care

You told me we'd get through this
You said we'd end up just fine
You told me rough times strengthen
You said that your heart was all mine

You told me I was your girl
You said I brightened your day
You told me we'd be happy
You said that we would get away

You told me you'd never leave
You said you'd never make me cry
You told me you'd give the world
You said that you'd never lie
...but you did.

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Written June 28th, 2006

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  • Maya Ogwaru
    June 12, 2007
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    Awsome but also very true! The more guys talk the less they make those words true!


  • poisongirl13
    April 11, 2007

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    I can relate to this so much. It sucks to have someone make promises and then break them all. This is so good. I love your stuff


  • Babii Licia81809
    July 5, 2006
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    Ooh...U go Hun...I absolutly love it..DAMN u got some talent hun..keep goin iight... Love ya tons!

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