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Realizing A Dream

What do you think
When your life's dream comes true
Are you the girl with everything
Or another girl with nothing to do
After your life's dream comes true
What is there left to do
Maybe trying to write a new song
Or sit around all day long
But hey! No worries
It's rare to have life's dream to come true


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Written June 28th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    May 20
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    If you had a username in you AN you would have won Gold in my contest. Sorry you missed out! I need to be a fair judge though.
    Becks

  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    May 13

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    Sjo! I'm glad that you say it is rare for us to make our dreams come true, I was getting anxious! This poem really hits close to home and I loved it!

    I need you to add your username in your Author notes please, I am a silver memeber and cannot see the names in the contest, that is why as a rule I asked for your name in the AN. I need to check out your main page and check to see when this poem was written to qualify it for the finals. Please send me an IM!

    Thank you for entering my contest.

    All the best!

    Becks

  • Crash Into Me...
    June 29, 2006
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    Shortstop,
    This is one of my favorites and you know you've got your sisters talents for writing. Keep it up!

  • galfalfa gold member
    June 28, 2006
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    I think when one dream comes true you aim for another - or help someone else achieve their dream
    Welcome to AllPoetry - i enjoyed this one! thank you!

    galfalfa