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UnWanted Dreams

Endless nightmares, I dream upon, unwanted dreams, I've had so long. Endless worries, that make me scared, a feel of rejection, and no one there.
Tears I've cried, and scars that show, unwanted dreams, that no one knows. Someone help me, save me from inside, help me see, that these dreams won't come alive.
Show me love, that I never had,tell me dreams, aren't always bad.  Tell me now, I'm wanted here, tell me that, there's nothing to fear.
Endless nightmares, I dream upon, unwanted dreams, I've had so long. Endless worries, that make me scared, a feel of rejection, and no one there.

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Endless nightmares, I dream upon, unwanted dreams, I've had so long. Endless worries, that make me scared, a feel of rejection, and no one there.
Written June 28th, 2006

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  • ItalianPride09
    March 21, 2007

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    LOVZ IT!!!

    HEY I LOVE YOUR POEM IT LIKE READ MY THOUGHTS IT MAKES ME FEEL LIKE IT HAS A PART OF ME AND THAT MAYBE WE HAVE SOMETHING GOOD IN COMMIN!!!


  • algoressister
    June 28, 2006
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    You have written a good one here....your words are haunting like the dreams...a perfect echo of the reality...your rhyme is solid and you kept the rhythm true to the end...excellent work...thank you for your contribution...ttfn