A day that I will never forget
S tarted in February with a brunet
I know the date very well
S tories unlimited I could tell.
T he time when I "frew you off"
E ver so sorry? RIGHT! I scoff
R emember when we sat in my room
I n silence dreaming about our groom
S illy memories flash through my brain
F orever sisters, like a ball and chain
O nly to find that it isn't so bad
R eminding ourselves it's okay to be sad
E ternal bonded by the ties of blood
V enturing through life without a scud
E ternally knowing that we'll be together
R emembering also,a sister is forever
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This is just a simple acrostic for my sister Kimberly. She and I are the best of friends and I have found that it is great to have someone, other than a friend sometimes to talk to. We are eachothers venting post, but I love ya sis!
~"Those who tease you; love you"~
Written June 28th, 2006
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hey whats up?really nice poem.how have u been?Sorry i havent been on lately.my lifes been kind of crazy lately.well write back if ya get this seeya. -
oh..Chelsea this is so sweet!!! Thanks for telling everyone that you threw me off the bed
lol! no but seriously thanks for this reallt sweet poem
Your sister for ever
Kimberly
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thank you very much for taking the time to read this and comment on it. YA, my sister and I are very close and right now she is in TN (like three states away from me) and I miss her, so I decided to write her this poem and let her know who I feel about her and how, in turn, others feel about her as well. Thanks for the comment again, and the applause
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Hey FireyAura it's me Nami son again.I like how you made every first letter into words that is really neat.A sister is Forever. Great job.You put your feelings and your hart into this poem that is really sweet...good jod! Keep it up..your writing is a touch to the hart.
Edited on Jun 29, 4:24 p.m. because ''. -
thank you so much. Yes, I think that we all care for sisters, even though many times I'm afraid we fail to share that feelings. Thank you for your comment as well as applause.
~*Chelsea*~ -
beautiful job
awwwww this is so beautiful.
and yes there is nothing like a sister, who is your best friend.
i feel all these things about my sister and more.
she truly is the best.
i really love this poem of yours, the flow is great, well written to.
i really enjoyed this thanks for sharing.
many blessings to you and your sister.
joyce
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yep, you know the bizare thing is that I miss her, and I wrote this today because I did miss her. Like I ave always said that we are eacch others best friends, but I really didn't notice how much we were. Thanks for your comment and applause, I know that it will make her day!
~*Chelsea*~ -
Took ya a couple of weeks to write something new
I miss talking to her since we haven't talked for a while (it seems like it's been forever). Kim is a really awesome person (just like her older sister) who I know she'll turn out to do something great with her life... like be a president or something 
I loved the style you wrote this in and the form you took. Great job all around, Chelsea! I know she'll appreciate it when she gets back and is able to read it
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thanks Tyler, she is away right now in TN. I am trying to surprise her with this and get people that she knows to comment on it by Saturday. I know that it'll cheer her up! Thanks
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This is just pure honesty and written from the heart. Awesomeness. I think this is my fourth and last applaud.
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