If I can’t feel pleasure, if I can’t have your tender touch,
I want it to hurt, in a blissful lust, grip me, in a raw clutch,
For every tear, take it out on me, hit me, beat me, kick me,
Every emotion in every breath, in every beat I plead to see,
I want to feel pain, ache and throb like I never have before,
I want you to punish me, blame me, till I’m wincing on the floor,
‘Why?’ you wonder as I kneel in a plead before your perfection,
I can’t face the sweetness, knowing it will end in rejection,
If I can’t have your love, your golden heart to grasp and hold,
I pray for the pain, the cruelty, the evil eye to sweetly unfold,
I need to feel something, I need a connection with you now,
I can’t take parting, I don’t care about the pain, I will allow
The blood to drip, the teeth to grit, the bruises to appear,
It will be heavenly with your presence, I won’t live in fear.
Author notes
i wrote this about a certain person.. i like them a lot and they are taken but they've told me they like me.. but every time we get closer it ends in rejection. last weekend we started hitting each other... it was random and i had no idea why.. but it became pleasurable after a while... knowing it was the only contact i could have with them.
:S it's confusing
anyways thx for reading..
Written June 28th, 2006
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hope everything turns out for you. It is an excellent write I enjoyed reading it is beautiful and full of emotion
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very beautiful, i had forgotten how beautiful your words were. keep it up. i can tell how heart felt it is.
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Heyy
Long time since ive been online properly
Sweeteh I understand this.. although i dont agree that anybody has the right to hurt another...
I am sorreh yew cant be with this person.. and i know it is very hard to understand but maybe it just wasnt right
A good friend of mine once said: " Maybe yew are looking in the wrong places and in the wrong people for the right reaction"
He is veyr philosophical.. well yew know where I am if yew ever want to talk... I hvent seen yew in ages either!
xxxx I love muchlie
Now about the poem: I think it is very well written... I like it a lot because it uses a lot of words and a lots of things which help make the poem seem like a plead.. which is what it is intended to sound like right??
.. It contains a lot of angst but is amazing at the same time
Keep holding on hunneh xxxxxxx -
good poem. not on such a good idea though, im sorry you cant be with them
i hope things work out for you, i really do. i havent seen you for ever! its been soooooooo long
this has a good use of emotion and provokes very visual images, good write
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It's very real. Very bold. I love it! good luck with your certain someone
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