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A Fading Fairy-tale

I can feel my soul being worn away,
What once made me unlike all the others,
Is slowly being striped away,
Until I am just like everyone else,

I'm filled with broken fragments,
Of the once peaceful dreams,
That consumed my mind as I slept,
They once brought me joy but now only terror,

The life I once lived,
The ones who made it worth living,
Seem to be the first things to fade,
Until I have nothing left,

My former self is gone,
Just a figment of the past,
A bad ending to this fairy tale,
I once called my life

Author notes

This is my newest poem as you can tell i'm was kinda in a gloom and doom mood when i started but as my mood improved the poem got worse lol so it's a little messed up at the moment when I get the gloom and doom mood back i'm come back and tweak it but intil then tell me what you think.
Written June 27th, 2006

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  • lciav
    August 6, 2007
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    I like your poems, they have a lot of feeling in them! Great job!