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Rippling Rainbow

View a rainbow clash
Somewhere in outer space
Reverberation

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Written June 27th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • DreamingMoon
    July 18, 2006
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    judged good.


  • Shakari
    June 28, 2006
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    This was a fantastic haiku. It held nature to a different depth, in its words. There was imagery and, well, it seemed as though I could hear a percussion-like sound as I read your words. Maybe the sound was that of a gong, which is the creator of the ripple rainbow of haikus. Well, this was a fascinating write. I am glad to have come across it. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work! Also, good luck in the ocntest!