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All children do it



She brought me a flower
Perhaps that is the wrong word
It was more a withered stalk
With all the petals  transferred
Some in her hair to make her pretty
Others  uninspiring  adorned on kitty
She said to me, do you like the rose?
I reply, It is beautiful darling,
with a petal up my nose
Often I have to stop and stare
At this sweet little angel so unaware
She makes up stories
And recites them out loud
Yes, this is my little sweetie
I am talking about  

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Written June 27th, 2006

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  • Truthful Princess
    July 11, 2006
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    pretty

    Aww! This poem truely reavels the beauty of little kids and there purness. They are always so sweet and kind and forgiving. They also can always make you feel better, and put a smile on your face.

  • Libra
    June 30, 2006
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    Thank you Linda, a very nice comment much appreciated.Hope you are well,lovely to hear from you again
    Babs


  • Lilredlll
    June 28, 2006
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    This write shows the tender feelings you have for this little angel. The movement of your verse flows with a lighthearted lilt to it. Thx for sharing....
    Linda

  • Libra
    June 28, 2006
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    What a wonderful comment Ellie...I tell you, if she grows up as nice as you princess I will be a happy nan, but she is really adorable.
    love and hugs.. ..

    Nanna Barbara

    Edited on Jun 28, 2:09 p.m. because ''.

  • Libra
    June 28, 2006
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    Aw sweetie...thank you love ..ADORING had to get real close to the screen to make sure I was reading it correctly...
    Edited on Jun 28, 2:04 p.m. because ''.


  • little-hug
    June 28, 2006
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    This is so beautiful and cute I think a flower is a flower even if its petals are gone and it is still beautiful because even if some people might not think it is beautiful now they would have at one point and they might think it was the petals that made them think it was pretty but really it was just because it belonged in the world at that moment and that never changes. It still belongs even if its stalk is withered um sorry if that doesn't make any sense but I like to pick flowers that look sad or withered and find a way to make them pretty because anything can be pretty I think this poem is soooo beautiful and its so nice that she brought you a flower even if you got a petal up your nose She sounds like a pretty little angel. I love the rhyming
    love
    ellie ♥


  • June 27, 2006
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    Adoring

    This is such a tender poem dear Barb. I really enjoy reading this deeply written poem. This poem is such a testimonal of a grand mothers love and devotion. Someday your little Aliscia will read these heartfelt verses and come to understand how important she is in your heart. God Bless


  • natari
    June 27, 2006
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    a sweet childrens'write


  • princesspaige
    June 27, 2006
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    Hi,i think your poems is very good and is very interesting i am only new to poetry, and i found your very sweet and kind. keep up the great work and keep writting more poems!

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