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One Tear Drop Falls

Night has fallen again
And I am all alone
The quiet here
Will deafen you

I walk up the stairs
That used to be used
By a family of four
But now there is only me

I walk to our room
At the end of the hall
I fall into a bed
That was meant for two

What do I do
With out you here
It’s cold here in this room
I lay on your pillow
That has become so cold
As “One Tear Drop Falls”

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Just popped in my head on xmas day.  Not sure!!!!
Written December 25th, 2002

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  • pschick9
    March 26, 2003
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    wow this is a strong poem! i love it! and i kinda go with it cuz i was in a family of four and then my mom and dad got divorced....so in a way i go with it!! oh wow u got me thinking!! great write though!! i always like it when poems make me think!!