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Vectra

So you said,
"I'll pick you up from school, in my new car,
and you can say,
'Look! My boyfriend drives a vectra! '"
A smart, executive car, and he's just eighteen.
See, I WANTED to say,
"Look! My boyfriend! I'm in love!"
but you turned my kisses away.

Author notes

Just something that happened once when I was with my ex, that I was thinking about in some free time at school today
Written June 27th, 2006

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  • sky black
    June 27, 2006
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    wtf? whats going on there amy...this is what free periods do to us! show a teacher, demand the hexagon back, wait! we get it back tomorrow anyway, sorry that you and him didnt last, i know you loved him and everytime, but maybe it proves that you were better off without him, it may not seem that way, but ya know? l8az love ya sky xxxxxxx

  • Bob the Elder
    June 27, 2006
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    wtf. that was funny. and then sad. which just ends up being tragedy! :'(


  • Aedara-Wren silver member
    June 27, 2006
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    Wow i really like this poem, its got a real meaning behind it, how some people seem to look on relationships as like a car, see how great your boyfriend is because he's got a car or because he's rich and all you really want to think about is how much you love him. Really good poem, very meaningful and also sad, well written Dara