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See

Look above the din, the din of the masses. Look above the wires and fires, steel and stone, climbing higher with every passing. Above seperation, above isolation, above civilization.
And See.

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Inspired by www.goabove.com.
Written June 27th, 2006

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  • astralshepherd gold member
    July 3, 2006
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    love the rhymes, dear poet, and the simple line. alliteration here is a plus adding to the pleasure as i read this aloud. blessings and best wishes, ~richard