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Bedroom Eyes

Those sexy little bedroom eyes
Just chill me to the bone
I feel my heart is going
To places that are unknown

They’re brown in color
But soulful in their gaze
Just don’t go getting lost in them
For they’ll take you through their maze

I shy away from looks
I don't know yet the game
But somewhere deep inside of me
I know, I want to play

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Too a brown eye girl I know, I won't say her name.  But I hope she knows who she is
Written June 27th, 2006

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  • StarEyes
    July 3, 2006
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    Terrific piece! Love the in this. I think that added so much to this write. I hope she knows who she is!

    prayes like always,

    Nyetta

  • June-bug
    June 27, 2006
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    Excellent

    Lovely Charlie, I hope she knows who she is too! Enjoyed reading it. keep writing!


  • gullionmar
    June 27, 2006
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    well charlie my eyes are brown lol, just like you told me you were on a foreign shore.but if this is who i'm thinking of her eyes are hazel lol wonderful poetry loved reading it