She knelt before me
As any good servant would
Her long hair covered her face
All she wore was
The binding on her hands
And the blindfold that hindered her sight
I've got a suprise for her
Tonight will not be like the rest
As I walked closer her head rose
I didn't order her head to rise
Punishment is now in order
She will now have to take me in her lips
Knowing I have made a mistake
I quickly lower my head
waiting in anticipation for my master
to speak to me.
As he gets closer I take in his essence
alluring my senses wanting, to touch him.
Standing in front of me, with my head still down.
He grabs my chin "you know better than to move
unless told to do so, Dont you!"
"yes master" I whimper in a low voice
Feeling he is displeased, I sit completely still
as he slowly traces his fingers along my naked skin.
Whispering of my punishment, and of his pleasure.
As I stared at her
My heart melted
I knew what I wanted from her
I knelt beside her and whispered in her ear
Of her punishment
I place a vibrator in her hand
And told her to slowly place it
In my favorite slit in her body
I could see the hidden pleasure
Flood her face
I know she is wondering what's next
"Now, you are to open wide
And take my length to the
Depths of your throat."
It's almost as if she wanted nothing less
She did as ordered
I Love when master allows me to please him
"thank you master" as I make my
way up his body
Slowly I begin to devour his throbbing member
Lightly licking the tip as I go up.
No longer wanting to be teased
he grabs a fist full of my hair
guiding my head faster along his length.
Hearing master groan in pleasure
leaves me wet in anticipation
for what will come next.
I continue as I can feel he is about to cum
a moan escapes me
as he expodes in my mouth.
After consuming every drop
I wait patiently for my masters next order.
Author notes
Gitaryzt was my partner on this, who was awesome to work with by the way....
Written June 26th, 2006
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Good tag team
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wonderfully vivid
great write.. awsome imagery an amazingly inticing peice... it take great talent to write peices like this and even more impressive as it was a group effort.. great write and thank you for sharing this wonderful peice.. great job -
"Whispering of my punishment, and of his pleasure." - hmmmm
I have a problem with this line ... seems most punishment fitting for naughty slaves is something that i REALLY enjoy ~shaking head~ what WILL Master do with me?!?!?! 
well done on a wonderful collaboration
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masterful imagery.....
Wow! This is a whole new genre for me to explore. I don't have a lot of experience writing erotica yet, but I sure hope to. It's enticing to read, and inspiring to this novice poet.
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great poem hits the nail on the head a very enjoyable read thanks for your kind comments on my piece cant wait to read more of your work take care scullion
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I loved this!!
Very nicely done!!
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love everyminute of this!!! too bad your master moved on but you can pay me visit anytime
the Satyr
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Isn't it time you moved on? I have. Must I continue to wait for you to catch up? There's an entire world out there to explore. Why not step out and look around?
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Wow, this was great! I loved the way you changed the perspective from the slave to master. That was awesome. And it was very hot as well, absolutely great job. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the astounding work!
-Icy Burn -
she collaborated with me, Gitaryzt...I am going to try and post it again to make it less confusing
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PS - it doesn't list the person you collaborated with??
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This is very erotic ... but i got confused with the constant changing from present tense to past tense within each stanza. Was this intentional? It was a bit off-putting for me, but the words were very ... arousing. Well done and good luck in the contest. Blessed be.
Serving Him eternally
rose
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