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Death by Phonebook

I know you're popular, but you don't have to prove it
Go ahead: prove it
I know it's ironic, but you don't have to point it out
Go ahead: point it out
You never listened anyway

Middle fingers and curse words
This kid travels in herds
You're not black, not even two-thirds
Leave the rest of it with the birds

I could spend some more time working on my image
But you don't need to tell me
I could spend some more time figuring out myself
But you don't need to call me on it
You never knew me anyway

Curse words and a middle finger
Promise not to let me linger
Curse words and a middle finger
Swear to god you won't let me linger

I suppose this is selfish, I suppose this is emotional
You assumed it was arrogant
I suppose this is unfinished, I suppose this is vengeful
You assumed I was numb
You never could take a hint

Closed fists and bloody lips
You should have taken helpful tips
Battered shoulders and bruised hips
Hopefully you'll drown in the puddle where your thought drips

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Written June 26th, 2006

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  • CherryBakewell
    January 10, 2007
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    hey this is really good It's kind of weird...but I like the repetition...it seems to me like two sides of an argument, I don't know that's just the impression I get. anyway it's great I loved it, thanks for sharing! have a nice day x

  • gmr2broadway
    November 9, 2006
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    amazing. i really hope you keep writing. take college classes, because i think you really have a gift!


  • myselfinthemaking
    June 27, 2006
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    Very vindictive. But not bad, not at all. You did a good job with the rhyming and feelings. Good job, keep writing.