Addiction
Such a weak word
In a description
Of my obsession
My Infatuation
Which is nothing
But pure and undying
Devotion
To a thought
An Idea
That in entirety
Is based on
The lives which raised me
And their enduring adoration
For each other
And this thought
This idea
Is simply stated
As it makes me feel
Alive
Making sparks fly
In my mind
That maybe
Just maybe
I can make it happen for me
Author notes
This is simply based on my obsession with love. I admit I am a hopeless romantic. I blame my parents. In a world where staying married is nearly impossible and the divorce rate just keeps going I am amazed by my own parents. They have been married for 18 years and have gotten in to two fight literally in that entire time. Even when we were rock bottom living in shit holes they made it through and this is just my hope that i will have that one day. tehe. maybe...
the best are undiscovered.
oh for those who bash on hopeless romantic and this it is dorky to love love get over it you know you like it hehe. =)
Written June 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- 5 or 6 options, come! change of rules!! by Xxthe angry gothxX.
350 points, ended June 28, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this wasnt dorky. this was great. i saw the depth of your love in this poem. it is great that make love makes you feel this way b/c lately love makes me sick to my stomach. it just doesnt love me. lol great luck in the contest. i appreciate it you following the rules and finding my contest.
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Love is a great obsession to have!
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lovely
crazy is the world of love.. it's rare to experience such devotion as your parents have.. ^-^ you will find that sort of love one day..
beautiful poem, as always.. your way of describing things just matures with age..
[i feel insightful, can you tell? ^-^]
<3
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