Wherever you are and wherever you go
I will say a prayer for you
No matter whether it be a good time or bad
Remember the mistakes and experiences you've had
Life will take you many places
You'll see many faces and races
But No matter where you go
I'll hold you close to my heart so you'll never be far
And I will show my love for you wherever you are
Author notes
Written June 26th, 2006
A contest entry
- Show Me the Love! by TitledHeart.
300 points, ended June 30, 2006, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this one is good. The rhyming is a little obvious at times, I would be aware of that, but I can excuse that, because the poem made me feel good. Good one yet again!
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great job, a good piece of work
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a very cute saweet poem displaying all of the heart and soul. well done i am sad it did not win anything .....boo
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This is a very sweet write. You should definately give this to your sweetheart! A few of the ryhmes sound very cliche, but I can't think of anything to put there instead.
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What a beautiful sentiment this is. It's one of those poems you're just glad you read because it leaves you feeling truly uplifted. I'll remember where this poem is should I ever feel down.
Thanks for sharing this.
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Aww, this is sweet.
♥ lyrebird -
woot i love the flow
and i gotta go!
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That was really cute.
~TitledHeart -
josh, i love this poem! keep the pen flowing dude!
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This poem has a nice natural gentle flow. I definitely wasn't expecting all of the stuff between the first line and the ending statement. Your wording was excellent. I am glad I read it. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. Best of wishes to you. good luck in all that you do....peace always in all ways. You rock....
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This is so sweet! I hope that the person you wrote this for knows how much you love and appreciate them. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it and keep up the wonderful work here!
Allen0826 -
very nicely written josh wonderfulwriting
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Aww Joshy! How cute! Good Job hun! Lub ya!
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awesome!
this is very good josh. i liked it! awesomeness! great work! i love you! -
But No matter where you are
I'll hold you close to my heart so you'll never be far
And I will show my love for you wherever you are
A great dedication here indeed...
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AWWWW....SO SWEET!
Awwwwwww....that's soooo sweet.....I wish sumone could show me love that way.....sooooo sweet -
Awww...It's very cute and sweet. (o^.^o)Makes me want to hug you, lol.
Whoever you are writing for, this person is lucky enough to have you to write this poem to him /her, although I bet it's a her...(I might be wrong, hmm....)
Your simple words play it right, to take upon a everlasting smile carved on a wood, cast down by daylight. I hope your sweeter words will forge to carry on, to the cutest things you say, that won't go wrong.
Meow. Goody Write! ^.^
~ Reisha
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AWw joshy how SWEEEET!!! I LOVE IT!
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