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Yes I am

Like a child new to life
I learn again resources needed
To make it through one more day

Now many sins pardoned
A slate wiped clean
But where shall I now go?

Twelve years of knowing everything
Lost somewhere in my past
Old friends slowly fade

Should I be so vein to
To be blinded by the joys
Or by the opportunities to come

Maybe I could forget this all
A silhouette of broken dreams
I'll just binge away these feelings

Confusion is my ally
Temptation now my sister
Hope has fell victim to me

What to do, what to do?
I stalled in this present day
Unable to start back up

Now I freeze in a moment past
Thawed only by a simple tear
I am sorry for this weakness
Goodbye

Author notes

I don't know, this one really come out of the deepest portions of my mind. I just needed to get sumtin out, I'll proof it after a few days and hopefully some comments.
Written June 26th, 2006

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  • tragediey-stricken
    July 12, 2006
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    good

    i liked it. you can really tell that you put a lot of emotion in this poem.