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Don’t you dare be that good to me
Don’t you think that I’ll melt, I’ll thaw
Keep away with all those sweet words, careful honeybee
My wounds are not raw

I know how to protect myself from supposedly god-sent angels
You can’t transform me into one like you
Your balm will not soothe me rather it reminds me of ugly spells
Don’t touch me or your dreams of wild mad beasts will come true

Keep away all angels; I have had enough of them
Don’t think I can take more
Nor I can take any more “friend”
I have to keep me inside me or this won’t let me live.

(Another one
In continuation…of the first….)

So do you think I can bear with you?
Well I don’t think so
So you will have to go, like the bird that just flew
Enough of you, enough of this chaos

I have told you times over
I love you and want you
You say the same, like a lover
So many chances go, but you never proved it true.

Instead you left me alone when I needed you the most
Amidst strangers, and you watched it all playfully
Like you don’t even know me, and you’re not my host
And later you ask me how I am, and I let you go free.

It’s all my fault, I let you take me for granted
I’ve never loved someone more, than I love you my darling
And I let it show, let you free of all charges in position slanted
And when you were in trouble, to me I let you cling.

That’s okay, but you left me alone
I loved you and I left you free
You came back to tell me that you’re also love-prone
I let you hug me, only to see me bleed.

You’re such a cruel definition to love
Digging knives in my heart
To kiss back just some
And to enjoy when we are apart.

Author notes

i do not have more to say.i have already poured out my heart here...and  i still cant help loving that person.....
Written June 26th, 2006

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    August 10, 2007
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    Anytime!

  • envymydeath
    June 18, 2007

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    I was within a coffee jar , but I loved its bitterness . Because it introduced me to the unreal sense of sweetness . How can something unreal be loved? When they knit that wavy maze , we recognise , we know that they're trying to be complex . Someone who really loves you , won't trick you with it . This piece is for....? (If I can know , because I tell you everything)

    • cutecut
      August 10, 2007
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      btw.... u have read only half of them... the ones which i wouldn't have wanted u to read.... neeche wali toh dekhi bhi nahi... ufff

    • cutecut
      August 10, 2007
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      hi resil/learstone...lolz..
      omg! so u actually read my poems... shit! lolz... these are very old...wrote em long back...
      but anyway.... tahnks for reading it.. and commenting... thank you!!


  • bedovich
    May 13, 2007
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    this is so sweeeeeeeeeeeet


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    April 12, 2007

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    Painful....

    Wow...I can feel your emotions flowing through...
    Maybe you can name the piece "Forbidden Temptation".. Just a thought

    Stay strong!

    • cutecut
      August 10, 2007
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      thank you for suggesting such a wonderful name...hmm....suits it... thank you!!

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