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Emery- Studying Politics

I'm a knife with a blade at both ends
No matter which way I go
I destroy whatever is in my way

I want to be gentle and kind
If only time had a button
In which we could rewind

If I could rephrase it
Redo what I've done
I'd let you know
You are my only one

Maybe I wouldn't hurt so much
Maybe I'd feel warm
If someone would love me
Show that they care

Just Kiss Me
Fix Me
Because I am Broken
Please, love is all I need

I can't take much more of this,
I just want you to know
That I carved your name into this bullet
So everyone would know that you
Were the last thing to go through my head.

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I couldn't make it rhyme. I just let it flow from my fingers
Written June 25th, 2006

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  • tarnishedheart
    July 3, 2006
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    It doesn't matter that it doesn't rhyme, sometimes it's better if it doesn't. This was really good, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!