There is a girl sitting alone.
Her blue eyes closed as she dreams.
He is still and silent, made of stone.
Not willing to talk it seems.
But, is this figure, tall and still,
Actually there or was it her will
to see him once again?
There is a girl sitting alone.
Her blue eyes closed as she dreams.
He is still and silent, made of stone.
An illusion ripped at the seams.
She dreams
She dreams
Of her lover's sweet touch.
His voice as soft as a breeze.
She dreams
She dreams
Of his loving caress.
And the feelings his passion brings.
Feelings of want, security, love.
Feelings that wash away tears.
Feelings of joy, of peace from above.
Feelings as he fights off her fears.
There is a girl sleeping alone.
In her lover's arms, she dreams.
Their future to them unbeknown.
Together forever it seems.
What did you think
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Soul-reaching
Strong poem....lost for words.
Great work!
Keep it up.
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wow! its been a while since i showed your poems some love and i had forgotton that you were such a good poet
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Awesome!
Hiya Sam
I Never know what to write when I comment on your poetry because it is always so amazing that I van never think of words that a wervey of it
I hope that you are well and that every thing is going well at collage for you!
All my love for ever
Sarah
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Dramok! Where the hell have you been huh? You come back for one day and then disappeared again. X_x
Thanks for the comment.
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Thats a fantastic poem Sam, the name may suprise you, but I decided to see what you've been up to lately, glad to see your writing good poetry, and your skills havent dwindled, keep up the good work.
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great poem, i agree, serene. good stuff sam, one mistake though "fights of " thought it should be fights off. All good.
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^_^ Thankies Aled.
He liked it too
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awwwww that's real nice sam
Nice calm and serene poem. 
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