i miss the way
you didn't love me
my previous addiction
has come back to haunt me
and all i want is to fade away
into my familiar melancholy
of course your every move
thrilled me
you were the spitting image
of what he did to me
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Written March 24th, 2003
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"and all i want is to fade away
into my familiar melancholy "
what can I say about that?
Nothing you haven't heard...don't do that though okay?
You've come way to far to...way way way to far to go back.
keep on writing! -
good
he was bad.. he is bad.. they both are...... you have mike now.. be happy.. try.. and forget about them... i know sometimes feelings resurface... but you can get over it.. trust me... i have faith in you... i love you
~BloodFlame
P.S. overall it was a good write... a bit short but really good
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This is very cryptic, I'm not sure I get exactly where the pain is coming from, but I loved the lines: "...fade away/into my familiar melancholy" very relatable! You allude to something more here, something very powerful and while I may not entirely be able to disipher what that is, I'm left perturbed. You've carried an air of mystery here, I'm left intrigued, great write!
Crestfallen
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