He Smiles From Heaven Above,
Like a shining Dove of Love.
We lived together for so many years,
Those memories fill my eyes with tears.
You are in a BIG part of my heart,
How could we apart?
All of us are so sad,
We miss you GRAND DAD.
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Written June 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- absolutly anything! by nobodys-girl.
527 points, ended December 29, 2008, 81 entries
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this is so sad...but a very nice poem. i lost my grandma a few years back and even now it still hurts. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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This is a beautifully sad poem. Your grand dad will always live on in your heart and through the memories. I know how this feels. I lost mine a few years ago and it completly changed my family. You gotta stay strong for them and live your life being the best you can be to make them proud of you. Their always watching over you.
I'm sorry but I don't think this really fits the contest. The poems were supposed to be about losing dad's so Nat can relate to them. You can enter another poem if you'd like. I hope you do. I'm excited to see what you can come up with
xoxo kaila xoxo -
Very touching. I feel the love echoing out from this like ripples made from throwing a pebble into a pond. Well written. Keep the ink flowing and good luck. Love and hugs...
~Donna~ -
LOVEE IT! =]
Awwwww baby! I understand how your feeling!
After loosing my father.. I too feel really LOW! 
Anyway to tell you, I love these lines-
He Smiles From Heaven Above,
Like a shining Dove of Love.
&
You are in a BIG part of my heart,
How could we apart?
You have any prob na? Just come to me and I will comfort you!
Love you loads!
Lots and Lots of Love,
Nida -
Excellent!
I just lost my grand dad, and i truly understand and appreciate your feelings..........Classic write..............Love, Shuvi -
Thank You for your sweet comment!
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aww this is a very lovely write and i enjoyed reading this. it was succinct, and sweet. right to the point, right to the last line which summed it all up very nicely. the title was an excellent choice of fit as well. keep up the great writing and good luck in my contest ! <3 *Jordan
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I can never replace your Grand dad sweet lady. But i will be your guardian angel when ever you need advice.
Grandpops Keith. -
Short, simple and beautiful... well done on this great write... I never met one of my grandfathers and was too young to realise what was going on when my other grandfather died but i can imagine how painful it is... It's great that you are remembering your grand dad. much love
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So Sweet, thank you for entering. We comment more fully when we judge the contest. Thanks again. Glenda and Adam
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I was never that close to my granparents, but I would expect it would have hurt to lose them, had I been. Athena
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touching
very sweet. im sorry that you lost him. i actually just had the funeral for my grandmother yesterday. i was one of those who carried the casket. the simplicity of the poem makes it wonderful. thank you for sharing and keep up the writing! -
excellent
awwww, so sweet. It makes me want to cry.
I miss him too. -
thanks!!
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sweet
cho chweet and tender! Its so short but so nice ! i love the way u r remembering ur daddy! Its really nicely written!
keep it up!
preets
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Nice poem you are very good keep it up
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i read your save the best for last and first its a wonderful poem good luck on the contest
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