There is a time and there is a place,
Where people have come face to face.
In every wonder of your day,
It just sort of happens in many different ways.
You go to work and you will find,
A happy heart in some and others a peace of mind.
Is working with greatness something that comes at your employ?
I assure you I've had much to enjoy!
Be sure to smell the roses true,
Wherever I go I'm sure to be thinking of all of you!
Remember each day with butterfly wings,
Thanks for bringing friendship of ALL THINGS!!
Written on June 22, 2006
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Originally it was a thank you poem to the people I worked with as I said good-bye to my great team to take care of some of my personal heart issues.
Written June 25th, 2006
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WONDERFUL POEM
This is so true Marianne. I love the message in this pooem. Really lovely and heartfelt. Take care my sweet niece. Aunt Sandy -
I loved the way to background goes with the "Be sure to smell the roses true" line. That's really cute. i think the repition in the first stanza really worked well and emphized what you were going to talk about in the poem.
~tay -
EXCELLENT!
This is so beautiful! I loved this poem! You did a flawless job with the flow and the rhyming. Beautiful and very inspiring. Thank you so much for sharing! -
encore!
this is a very true poem with many heartfelt words...i loved how you made it too! it flowed and it was georgeous!i loved it! i mean it spoke so true, and coveyed so many things..i usually read dark poetry...but i thought i should give this a chance and it is a really great poem! Most of my poetry is either about love or dark things...and i am so happy for you since you found that you write really good friendship poetry! great job and i must commend you! -
This poem is so filled with love it brought a smile to my face (I needed that although I think I cracked a few new wrinkles) well worth the wrinkles. I liked the flow you presented and the whole idea especially agreed with your last line. Thanks for sharing.
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cute!
aww so cute! great job! flow and rhyme terrific! -
this sounds like it belongs on a hallmark card ....nicely done ...very sweet ....loved the peaceful message
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This was a very sweet poem. It rally gave the point acrossed that you cared about the ones you write of. The flow is really good in this and I like the ryme. Great job
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Nicely done, very broad and open hearted, a kind messege that isn't seen to much anymore, i liked the rhyme of all the stanzas... well done.. keep writting
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