Stepmoms are sent from heaven
And if you are lucky
God will give you one like mine.
Author notes
This was my first try at a PIXIKU on AP and actually my first poem.
My name is HALEIGH and I am known as HaleighGrace here on AP.Had my beautiful stepmom never graced my life--i truly believe i do not know where i would be today. I believe everything happens for a reason and when she entered my life 10 yrs ago--i was trully blessed as she became mother to me ,my little sister Hannah and a wonderful wife to my father. And now we have a baby brother who is almost 2 yrs old. In the few words I have spoken in this write--I have said a million.
HALEIGH
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What did you think
Comments
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nice write. thanks for sharing.
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I am thankfully blessed with my mother
and it doesn't matter if she's even a stepmother or not.
Any mother can be great, You said that.
I loved it.
Thank you for entering.
-Emily
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this is a wonderful write! it expresses nice sentiment. kudos for doing a form too, i'm not one who's able to restrain myself to a certain form in most instances, so people who can impress me. thanks for the entry!
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I used to foster children and adopted a few long time ago.
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Aww that's lovely... not many people appreciate their stepmums/dads very much, I don't know why. People presume they are Cinderalla related, but they aren't always, I know many people who have step parents who are really nice. I'm sure your stepmum is really flattered and honoured that you care about her so much.
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I like this. I would like to see more of what your life was like before the defining moment and why this was truely a defining moment for you.
Criss -
sweet
what sweet words you have here.
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This is such a very kind write for your stepmom.
She should be happy to have you. Very touching and nice 
Thank-you for the entry.
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Wonderfully done! Woot!
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This is really gorgeous. Your step mum's very lucky to have someone like you write this for her. You've fitted heaps of lovely feelings into three short lines. Great work.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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wow, usually people don't like step parents, i know i love my stepdad, so i can relate.. great write and good luck
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Well that was... Short. Well, this was a good haiku, though I am not a fan of them. Keep writtin, kid! Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
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awww this was such a good write..and the few lines that you have written were very powerful and emotional..you were lucky to get a good stepmother keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest
XTashaX -
this was an iteresting poem, altough I do not know what a pixieku is it was still a very good poem . thanks for entering
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short and sweet nice job
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This is really amazing, and I like it better than the other one! You are definitely a finalist!
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if I am lucky there will never be a time when I will need one! This was a very nice thing to say anyways. It is touching
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Short sweet i love it nice job adn thanks for entering
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Very sweet, and a different sort of love poem. Thanks for entering.
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The message is defintely clear in this poem. You really love your step mom. I don't seem many poems about them on this website. They really do desreve them too. This is really beautiful and creative work of poetry. Keep on writing. Thanks for all the great enteries in my contest.
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cute. short, simple and straight to the point. and i agree wiht SEA angle,this does belong on one of thise Hall Mark cards- no doubt 'twil be the most popular pone and sold out as ssoon as it hits the shops.
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This piece is beautiful and comes straight from the heart. I am glad that your stepmom is perfect to you, for I know many people that have stepmothers as bad as Cinderella's and Snow White's! You should keep up the great writing and the love towards your stepmother. I know that her love for you can never be destroyed. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing! Also, good luck in the contest!
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This is really kool, your very lucky to have a nice step-mum.
Joanna -
Excellent
This is beautiful and I am SO happy that you appreciate and love your stepmom so much. I know your stepmom is happy you do too. Well done! Thank you for entering your first Pixiku contest. This is good enough to be on a Hallmark card for stepmoms. Gold Crown Quality since straight from the your heart.
Edited on Jun 25, 7:01 because ''.
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