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A date

There is a chill in the air
As we walk along the beach
Listening to the wave
As they rush over our feet

We run back to the shake
And knell beside the fire
Wraping ourself in each other
Warming our salty goosebumped skin

I start to kiss you face
then you neck and shoulders
tasting the salted skin
removing each drop of the sea

I move farther down

And then even farther
Soothing and warming your
Body with my kiss and breath

I take your lusious mounds
One in each hand and kiss them
Watching them respond
Watching them pop out and beg

My hands move to you back
As roam up and down
First softly then a little harder
I feel your strenght

AS I lay you down
I close this poem
For a gentlemen never tells
And this tongue has better things to do

Author notes

If only, A fantasy, Yes but no, this is me,  The bad boy, yet gentleman
Written June 25th, 2006

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  • gullionmar
    June 25, 2006
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    awsome writing charlie i agree with june-bug it's nice to know that gentlemen never tell keeep up the wonderful writing god bless you n our troops

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    June 25, 2006
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    Thank you for your most sensually beautiful write Charlie, I love the beach setting good luck in my contest Josephine

  • June-bug
    June 25, 2006
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    wonderful Charlie, nice to know that you can be a bad boy and still be a gentleman