rumors are like tumors
cultivated from insignificant matter
developing into wickedness
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Written June 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- Pixiku (Wild Child of Haiku & Senryu) by SEA angel.
300 points, ended June 30, 2006, 11 entries
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I do so like this and agree whole-heartedly........
Nicely captured.........
Best of luck in the contest............
Leance
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Your words hold so much truth. How I wish that I had created this pixiku, but that only shows your brilliance. I loved how there was that rhyme between the comparisons. In fact, you created a simile within this piece. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing! Also, good luck in the contest!
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Oh very true, that's what happened to me, the runours caused me a lot of pain, but my Mum stood by me when my friends didn't.
joanna -
True.
I agree. Rumors run rampant amid minds diseased with hate and insecurities and idle chatter which is the devil's workshop. With the lies oozing out like pus from an infected wound infecting reality with their affliction. Spreading like a cancer and terminal to the targets of rumors for tumors have no heart or soul. Rumors popping up like an attention seeker that is self centered, rude and cannot see beyond own nose sucking the life out of everyone. Yes, rumors are like tumors and I hope those who spread are cured of their affliction of gossiping by removing rumor habit from their lives. Well done! Thanks for entering.
Edited on Jun 24, 6:12 p.m. because ''. -
I agree with you 100%! Rumors.. I hate them with a passion... anywho great write and I wish you luck! bye bye
<3 Triste
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