So let us kiss those summer stars together
All i want is to stay in your strong arms on those hazy, fire fly filled nights
Time was on our side, now we are thinking differently
I never imagined i would be the one kissing you underneath a canopy of trees
You're the summer romance I have always hoped for
Thoughts of you always fill my mind
Our old memories stay close to me as i envy the happiness and carelessness they contain
I fight my tears as my love for you overwhelms me once again
I want to stay with you forever
I'm longing to get lost in those metallic blue eyes
I have never felt so secure when I'm lying next to you under that brilliant sky
When you kiss me goodnight and hold me close,
Just know that I never want you to let me go...
Author notes
Ok I'm not sure how this turned out, I just had to get some emotion out on how I feel right now. I love him so much it hurts. We are going to different schools this fall, and we are trying to make the most of it now. Hopefully we can stay together. He is so frickin amazing it's crazy. Excuse my random input, please tell me what you think...
Written June 24th, 2006
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I don't about everyone else but I really did like this poem. I really felt the emotion in it. Very nice.
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Isa, this comes across as happy. WHY?! you yell at me when I write something happy. But it's alright. Not your best.
Damn happy person.
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OMFG. lol. Sorry for the late comment! Anyway, I really liked this, its so sweet and the emotion is strong. The flow is good, and it was just written really well overall. Lovely job ^.^
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Teehe thanks hun! Yeah, I agree with you this isnt my best poem in the world. It was just something to get emotion out. Lol thanks again!
Isabel
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To be honesty You, I don't think this is your best "love" poem, to be honest I'm so use to dark, I think you should stick to dark. This is an awesome poem, just because I know what it's about.
Me
PS-CONGRATULATIONS!!!
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That's really pretty- you write good poetry.
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That's really sweet! You have something everyone wants...so hold on to it. Keep it. And keep writing about it. Obviously everyone loves to hear a sweet love story/song/poem. Cute write. Keep it up.
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Awww..This is rreally cute.
The last two lines were sooo beautiful.
What you have seems really special, try to hold on as long as you can.
'longing to get lost in those metalic blue eyes' AWWW!!! That was my fsvorite line..because it was just so so cute!!
I love it!!
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Yeah, Amy i agree with you 100%. I havent been that great at writing lately, as you can tell from my three recent poems or so. Grrrgh, I have so much inspiration but I dont know how to get it in poem form. Well see ya around. Much love hun!
Isabel
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its not bad.. definitely not my favorite from you isabel. but, its good. keep it up... bye :[ - Amy
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