dressed scarce, i walked out to the dark SUV that waited for me. silently i slipped in.
" i say, well...u wont really dissappoint Him." except for that Jeannie spoke nothing to me as she drove far. although i thought i saw her trying hard to keep her eyes on the road instead of one my treasures.
in an hour the car reached where it was destined. Jeannie stepped out lead the way to the huge mansion, while i silently followed her right in through the huge oak doors.
the flames of the fireplace licked the air. and there like a shadow He stood.
" Greetings Master", i spoke these words, with a new vigour.
*** it hadnt been long since i had submitted myself to this. i was no slave thrown for an auction. i was a slave who knew what self respect, what ego are. i had myself surrendered nto this bond. both He and i knew that i could slip out of this bond if i wished. both knew thati served in no fear of punishments. and perhaps that was what distinguished me. i had come to him for complete submission. a place where i could let myself be dominated. a place where i could flame myself.
" yes, Sheila, my petite slave, welcome...welcome HOME", and he with a wave of hishand sent off Jeannie.
the clock had struck.
"kneel in front of Me, Slave and beg for It" he spoke with the words of command.
kneeling onto my nimble feet, i bowed my head, "Master, please let me have your majestic tool, so that i may realise o my thirst. flood my throats with the streams of ur might, of ur power."
" Very Well then". he spurted.
i knew the procedure. i began.
unzipping Him, i watched in joy as his mighty, yet not so hard cock fell out. slowly i let my ongue feel the fleshy head. then i began kissing it..hmmm....slowly filling the cock in my mouth, as my tongue stroked it graceful, letting sensation be carried throughout His body. whilst i did so, my fingers played with amazing balls, stroking them...playing them..i felt him grow strong.....
exchanging my positions, i let my mouth have the pleasure of the balls..hmm...those amazing bouncing balls that filled my mouth as i sucked them..feeling a new ecstacy...my fingers began to stroke his hard cock....i sucked the balls better....jerking his hard cock...feeling the smell of pre-cum....i knew i was getting..
"well slave, get ready...but remember that u must not haste." He spoke with a certain coldness, though i knew within He was excited.
i gazed into His majestic eyes, my mouth wide open as he shot right into me...the stream flooded my mouth...i went for The cock...sucking it...raving it with pleasure..filling my mouth with every drop of the white magic....my mouth was completely filled...my mouth began to ache..but i dared not swallow it...i began to feel the gracious taste of it..the taste itself driving my dear treasure wet....it seemed like ages..but i dont think i minded...i enjoyed the taste...i couldnt imagine when i had been served a better drink..
"now u may" He bellowed.
i swished the whole stream in my mouth thrice before i drank all of it...it burnt down my throat..making me feel new heights of ecstacy...
"undress urself my dear Sheila", he said.
i waited not for a second as i undid my shirt...not very fast...making every move show some sexiness...as i slipped off my shirt my mountanios treasures bounced out...firm and round...my perky nipples steady for attention...and it took me no time to slip off my very short skirt, so that my own slow brook would be seen from my secret cave...doing so i slipped on the dog collar which bore my name....
"that was well done. i am happy with u. now lets make way for further things. lay urself"
silently i lay my body on a cold stone slab. it was purposely made so cold. and effect was fine. shivers ran through my spine making me grow wetter, my peaks erect.
He stooped over and ran His hand over my moutntains...his tongue gently stroked my peaks...teasing me....not like any horny rascal...but with a skill...a skill that made its effect instantly...He had just started but it was more than what i could bare...he pinched my right nipple with his lips as his tongue pressed my nipple down..but my other breast was fed with his fingers..that twicked my left nipple...sending waves from both breasts...
but other hand was rubbing my thigh..not my treasure..just my thigh...i was driven crazy...i moaned...i shrieked...scream...for i knew that my Master luved them...and anyway i couldnt have stopped myself...his fingers touched my clit..and i knew i knew heaven...
i shouted..."Master"...but that was enough to let my Master know that i was ready..ready to serve him...but he continued the same treatment...until i blasted...flooded...contracted...orgasmed...flooding the gates of my cave..making his fingers feel my blasts....but that did not make him caese...he continued..if only faster...i restrained myself for long...become i cried out again.."Master..Master..ready..ready.." panting..
this time he went down..kissing down my stomach...till he reached my cave...cleared of all dark grasses....without removed the three finers that were in me...he flicked in his tongue..but it wasnt all gentle now...He forced...i cummed....but still he did not cease..tears rolled down my cheeks...the pleasure i recieved was gr8...i cummed again..and again...these multiple orgasms drove me blind...my body rose and fell...i moaned....yelled..
slowly..after ages He moved his face...my body relaxed..the feeling that then came over was amazing...i looked at my Master in admiration./..he was wonderful.....i envied Jeannie so much...but i was fool to realise that it was all over....he surely had more plans...but the more i lay on this stone platform...the more i felt excited....
i had never been dominaed before...it was who was usually in charge...i knew my surge hadnt died yet...i know He knew that too...thats why he left me to lie there....and that was when i experienced the true joy of being dominated....seeing him play Jeannie...feeling myself grow mad with horniness yet not allowed to touch myself by myself...this was the true feeling of domination..
Author notes
with wishes that my AP Master AJ may have liked this piece i have written for Him on His orders....
my first try at erotica..well...
Written June 24th, 2006
What did you think
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mmm yeah this was hot! come on AP more and write more!
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Submitted for my enjoyment
love to hear of a slave so well behaved...prepped and shaved...on knees in lust...accepting every thrust.
The master though is not done as he leaves his love on your tongue.

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Everyone needs a Master. Good write


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Beautiful!


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jeese u know how to write !
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wow this is really good i like it
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now that you have learned to serve your Master, I hope you tell us more tlaes of how he delights in you. Good job, lady
the Satyr
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Wow, I really liked this. Are you sure you never wrote more? I'd love to see some more. The one thing that bothered me was that you needed to run spell check on it and that you didn't write out the word "Great" towards the end you wrote "gr8" which I find to be very unprofessional.
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HOT!!!
*This was incredibly hot and had me yearning for more!
. I'm so glad that i've re-joined Desires group and found you're write...i've gone to your auth page and bookmarked it!!!!
...i can see that there's more to cum!!!!
Looking forward to more of your adventures and imagination!!!
lusty lion..................................Lionslove
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Intense and gripping. A well written peice of dominance. I can't wait to read more
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wow... that was a great story... there are a few spelling errors other thant hat I really licked it.
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run it through the spell checker. Then you can fix the grammar issues you have, and the chat lingo that is really distracting. Otherwise it's a good story.
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Wow, this is an excellent tale!!! And has got me a bit hot under the collar
I'm glad I read it!! It certainly gives me an insight into your personality!! Sarah
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well...i wanted to write an erotica that wouldnt mess the skill i possess...i didnt want to make it such a mess that it would be insulting to the reader ( the gentlemen and ladies)..
also i wished not to give plain sex...thats where i put up the idea of domination...an ununsual but not uncommon feeling.
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Not usually a fan of such adult related subject matter but you did an excellent job with the story line and keeping the content tasteful. Good job! -
Great content and very tintillating.. now, if you look at this piece from an editor's point of view there are things that need cleaning up.. .this will be a fantastic piece when you do that hon... great beginning and now make it a fantastic piece of art
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thank u dear...luv u..
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Very sizzling, sexual, leaves little to the imagination.
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thank u so very much..luv u for that..
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thank u...hope it did u good on the sexual side..lol...
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GODDAMN....that was BEYOND hot !!!!!















