I panic
I'm frantic
I call her on her cell
I need to get in touch with her
I need to know she's well
Please don't hurt your self
Please don't die today
I'm not ready to let you go
So much left to say
I hope your there
I hope you home….
Your house is empty
quiet and cold
The story of your life
Silently told
I found your note
At the bottom of the stairs
God bless you
Forever in my prayers
Author notes
Written June 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- #4 Losing a loved one. by xox-lankan-xox.
500 points, ended March 13, 131 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You have written a beautiful piece of poetry, sad yet beautiful. You have the many emotions of pain and sadness in your every word. Congratulations on the trophy.
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Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and the best of luck to you.
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This was an amazing poem and I really like how you've written it. Where'd you get the idea for this poem? I hope it's nothing personal, if so I'm very sorry. Thanks very much for entering this wonderful piece into my contest, your an amazing poet. I will be around to read and comment more on your poems so until then take care! Bye!
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This is amazing! you were able to illustrate so much depth and pain in a limited number of words. I really liked this piece.
Keep writing
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Wow... This hits hard with only a few words. I'm sorry that you had to go through this. losing a loved one hurts, especially to this type of scenerio. i wish we didnt have to go through it at all, but then again, no one can live forever, no matter how much we want to believe it. you are a very talented writer, and once again, I'm sorry. Thankyou for the comment, its appreciated. Stay strong..
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