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Looking Glass

Looking Glass

This is just a looking glass
That we look through each day
A tear, a smile, two lovers
All words on this here page

A maze of places I can go
To find what I look for
Someone to spend some time with
Till I find something more

I come here with a smile and words
To find a women and a friend
To find a little magic
And to share where I have been

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TO the internet and all that it has become, our looking glass into the world.
Written June 24th, 2006

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  • StarEyes
    July 4, 2006
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    Touching! and so very unique! I love the way you did this write. Stay safe my friend. Prayers are sent your way! Keep that pen flowing! and as far as my book, I saw a link here to publish amreica, and things took off from there.


  • Tam
    June 29, 2006
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    Touching

    How touching! A lovely and unique thought you have here. Very well done. I hope you are safe and I'll keep you in my prayers! I wish you happy, health and peace. Tammy

  • Asperations
    June 29, 2006
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    excellent

    I really love the meaning in this poem. Nicely done.


  • inkedsnow
    June 27, 2006
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    awwwwwwww....this is really cute. It's very sweet and is filled with a lot of meaning. I like the whole looking glass part of it.

    kelly lin


  • earthstar
    June 26, 2006
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    excellent

    a looking glass reflects two ways it shows a reflection of hope and self growth in an age of change. I love this poem hope for the best for you. you write such lovely poems that show a caring heart for people you give so much it shows in your words. Your words are magic someday someone will see the wonderful in you by you kind words take care will keep you in my prayers. take care b wonder write do not what to add very good


  • gullionmar
    June 24, 2006
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    ncely writen charlie,our eyes are the looking glass to the world we see keep up the wonderful writing

  • June-bug
    June 24, 2006
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    Execellent Charlie, so well said,the internet is our looking glass into the world, great imagery, its awesome,love it

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