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DIrty Mind

Dirty Mind

If only I could slip right in
And read your dirty mind
I might find a pleasant place
If I knew what you liked

I’d know just how to cuddle close
And where you liked my touch
I’d hold you close and softly
All those things you like so much

And though it may not happen
I may never make you scream
I go to a happy place each night
You still live in my dreams

Author notes

For those who touch my inner self in that special way.  Those of you that reach for my fantasies
Written June 24th, 2006

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 26, 2006
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    Great poem!! Very um teasing
    Very well written.
    Keep up the great work.
    Thank you for sharing.

    Jeannie D Hunter


  • deadheartedkitty
    June 25, 2006
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    verry amusing i liked it alot, you have talent keep up the good writting....


  • Celticmoon
    June 25, 2006
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    A simple format with a wonderful rhyme. The words so simple but elegant. A wonderful lil deication you have penned. I really liked this piece. Geat Job!