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Chat room

The Chat Room

I see a pretty face in here
Smiling back at me
I wonder who she is
What will this come to be?

Is she laughing with or at me?
Will I ever know?
I am not sure I care
I don’t want to stoop too low

These chat rooms are kinda fun
To help the days go by
A new found communication
I sit back and take a sigh

I’ve made friends the world over
And that I think is good
Can I keep all my promises
You know I really should

But this world is make believe
And liars have no couth
But for me it’s not my way
Because I prefer the truth

Author notes

THe is just a fun ditty for those who hope to find love on the internet.  I all I have right now.
Written June 24th, 2006

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  • June-bug
    June 24, 2006
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    I love this one, Espacially the line I prefer the truth, Very powerful statements


  • TheMuffinSlayer
    June 24, 2006
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    I love this poem man, It has a powerful meaning and I loved the line "And liars have no couth But for me it's not my way because I prefer the truth." That line stood out to me from its simple meaning.

    -Peace-