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Running In A Hollow Abyss

Running in a hollow abyss
A never ending spiral
Captivating my soul
Chaining me
Enslaving me
My thoughts are cold
My soul is numb
I am damned in this place for eternity

Author notes

I know if I get comments, most will say they don't understand this. Just to let u all know for me that abyss is love. For you it may be something else. Let me know what u think.
*A note for you Beth: I know u understand this because u have followed me though this "situation"*
Written June 24th, 2006

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  • angelsmiracle
    June 24, 2006
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    I totally understand this. Hmm, I wonder why. Thanks for the note at the bottom for me! I love ya too (even if you didn't say that) Lol. This poem totally relates to the situation in fact,you put your words into those emotions that made it sound so unique, but in a way that's understandable. The part that caught my attention the most was "running in a hallow abyss" that was one of the greatest way to describe something like this. Great job.
    Edited on Jun 24, 10:46 because ''.


  • June 24, 2006
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    awsome

    u're so right. it's like u wanna let go, but you know the second u do u'll never be alive again......