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my heart pounds at the very thought of you
i stand still
held up by your strong arms, laid across your broad chest
silenced by the heartbeats
my love is overwhelming, uncontrolable most times
yet the sting of your gentle kiss will soon kill me
unreturned passion, unoticed love
i stand still
show me something...anything

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Written June 24th, 2006

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  • Inlovewithperfectio
    June 24, 2006
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    REAL

    its a real emotion, people, look close and recognise it, because while it is short, it sends out its message perfectly