for all of my years
I had never understood,
this world's fantasies
are just one of a kind;
infringements of the past.
Author notes
happy memories will always be happy memories;
past will still be part of the present and of the future;
life's changing but its roots are not.
Written June 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- Options Contest, Allowing Prewrites by AlternateCandidate.
500 points, ended August 13, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Unfortunately, I don't think I fully grasp what you're getting at with this piece. Of course, this is no fault of yours. I just think I would be able to judge it better if you would explain your purpose within the piece to me. Thank you for entering.
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thank you Malabu for that wonderful comment
i really appreaciate it. good day my friend. Chao..
ER -
must say...lovely sentiments with a different twist...not what I expected...but then....wonderful just the same....lovely thoughts of a parasol....
Malabu -
Thank you LB!!!
I really appreaciate your comment. you had a nice contest on free verse. good luck in judging.
ER -
This is certainly unique and sicerely quite a beautiful write. Thank you so much for this entry and good luck in my contest... x LB
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