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Sweet Summer Rain

Sweet summer rain came in a gust of wind
Water pouring off the wheels
As the four wheeler was kicked into high
Riding so fast with you behind me
Made the droplets feel like stones
Till our destination was made
That old pond with the table where you and I sat
For over an hour
Just talking
And kissing
And wishing the words wouldn't come out so easily
With each kiss
Each drop of water running down our faces
  [[Hair]]
  [[Skin...]]
And with each beat of my heart
I can't help but to think

This is love

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I had a very good night...
Written June 23rd, 2006

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  • ForeverLastingComa
    June 24, 2006
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    good write i liked it

  • Umbilical Residue
    June 24, 2006
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    oops here ya go

  • Umbilical Residue
    June 24, 2006
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    good write i can tell time , emotion, and care went into it


  • Soon To Be A Dad
    June 24, 2006
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    Most definately a good write...I liked it, it seems like it'd go really well with music, but then I always have some song in my head, or some tune, the life of a muscician...it's great, and geez, maybe you should take breaks every so often, you seem to produce great works when you did that. Hopefully you're love will last, and good luck with everything.

    ~letting you go~