In battle
In dire bloodshed
We struggle in the depraved air
Grievance seeps into our viens
The abilities, the skills, our efficiency
...and heart, is all we need
Breaking the enemy
We bring his fury to an end
Guiltless and Honest
No need for reinforcement
Today we are triumphant
Today we will save the world
Author notes
I choose number '8. write a poem that includes the following words:
- breaking
- enemy
- honest
- save'
Written June 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Whatever i write has a little bit of you..... by Lithium n lollipops.
300 points, ended June 27, 2006, 10 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for the comment!
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I really enjoyed this.
You did an amazing job using the word bank.
I loved the line
"Grievance seeps into our viens"
So descriptive.
-Lithium n Lollipops
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