Visions
Vision I spy in front of my eyes
so grand all flying horse’s look,
as wings take them to soar over.
My heart sings with love at the splendor
viewed as they ride my way.
Author notes
A.9 D.5 E.14 F.3 G. 4 H. 6 I.10 K.2
L.6 M.3 N.8 O.12 P2 R.8 S.12 T.9 V 3 W.4
Y.6
WOW! This was some challenge, I ended up with a headache, counting and recounting, too many letters over the amount.
Phew! I made it! I THINK! I'd better recount them! 
After a kind contestant counted them for me & I altered it, I hope it's right now. PHEWWWWWWWW
Silver
Written June 23rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Limited Contest by Samplette.
300 points, ended June 29, 2006, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Thanks Tommy, believe me it really gave me a headache, but it was a challenge, and I would pick about unicorns and I couldn't use any U'S
ugs Joan
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Wonderful!!!
Wow Joan!
Now that's a poet!!! Good work, the rules were mind boggling to me! Hey this is quite lovely. Thanks for sending me here.
Tommy
CoNgRaTuLaTiOnS On YoUr SiLvEr TrOPhY Joan!!! -
Angelica,
Wow that is complicated. Not the most poetic of poems but a great accomplishment to the contest. It defines the picture so eloquently. I thank you for your kind words on my poem. Words are an outlet for me. If you read my new post you'll see my intentions of the author's comments.
Always pen from the heart and you shall never write wrong!
Thank you,
~SongByrd
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Thank you sweetheart, will hop over to your page and read some.
Hugs Joan
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Wow!!!!!! That was amazing!!! You have such a way with words. I would appreciate it if you could read/commented on some of my work also.
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You did great, and also made my job easier. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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Thank you Crystal.
Joan
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hey that's beautiful! a very soothing and pleasing write! nice one. and good luck in the contest.
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Thanks Tang.
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great poem i love it!
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Dear angelica,
A beautiful poem with picture combination. Very impressive.
Good Luck in the contest.
Tang
Edited on Jun 29, 8:43 p.m. because ''. -
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WOW! This looks complicated from what I read in the author's commment box. The poem was fabulous even before I read that required immense concentration to accomplish such a lovely poem that would also meet contest rules. A+++++ ***** -
'angelica' how clever and you paint a splendid vision too. Thank you.
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Thanks Kenny for stopping by, it was a beaut challenge to create the poem.
Hugs Joan
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Thanks Pat, it was a real challenge.
Love Joan
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Awe this is really gorgeous Joan and what a magnificent picture.Superb my friend.Kenny
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Oh... What a sweet poem.
Hugs & Laughter
Pat
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