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See the sacred sway
of sea oats in the sand...
Surrounded by soft sunlight
in summer’s silky sunset serenade...
Singing the song of silver-pink secrets
while silently soothing the seeker's soul...
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Written June 23rd, 2006
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silent reading and appreciation.
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Salutations! Seems there's nothing left to say but same. Tantalizing little piece.
Excellent work
Tara
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Dear presence,your with a few lines you create a rythm that gives a feeling of freedom and silence in the readers mind.
thank you.
Ingrid -
This is delightful. My favorite place is by the seashore. It is a sacred space, filled with visual serenity, soothing sounds, and salty scents, feeding my soul.
I am moving to Florida in three weeks! I'll be free to walk the beach every sunset. Life is beautiful!
TW -
These beautiful words sure soothed my soul- loved the background you have chosen - loved each and every word you have penned to compliment it-'in summer’s silky sunset serenade...'-can almost hear the serenade-' song of silver-pink secrets'-very pretty indeed- I have liked the way this poem plays on the readers senses and gently leaves a wonderful serene feeling behind
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Smooth and soothing are your thouhjts coming through in the lines so matching this beautiful image.Nice penning poetic heart!~Suseann
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Magic!
Ahhhh dear Presence, This is a magic moment. Jane -
Sweetly sung, sir!
Say! Somebody stole my essence, I mean my esses! Simply shuckin', son. Sweetly said, soulfully sensed, soothingly seen. Such is the surrender seekers savor.
Peace, Rod -
such a sweet sounding serene soul-song ...
simply stunning ...
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Dancing upon the shore to the rhythm of being. Wonderful sweet Presence. Thanks for the dance.
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Sighhh...such sweet sentiments swaying, Scribe...serene & scintillating...Beauty~full, my Friend...
Wanda
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