Life is strangling her with bloodstained hands
Having no sympathy or consideration on her broken soul
What ever happened to friends forever?
Well maybe it was an illusion
Time is against her, tearing her up
All her scars scream at her, to tear them open once more
To slice her pale skin, to feel the blood flow lazily down her unsteady arm
All their voices swirling in her head, killing this fragile girl
Confiding her in her room, afraid to face the world outside those four walls
She wants to run far away, somewhere else besides a broken life
She's full of rage, full of fire deep within her
Empty promises, and painted smiles on the faces of the deceivers confuse her
She hates all the characters in this f*cked up show
Emptiness is all she knows, it's all she feels
Who the hell can she turn to for some form of security
She's on the desperate hunt for acceptance
All her efforts are worthless, not worth the time
The life she once knew is fading away, almost invisible
The only thing left of this girl are wet cheeks and tantalizing wounds...
Author notes
Ok, this all came to me. having a really emotional time. w.e screw this s.hit!
oh yea most ppl suck big, big a.ss *rolls eyes*
Written June 23rd, 2006
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Thanks for commenting my poem. It was greatly appreciated!
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wow.... i'm breathless! this is a lot of emotion and pain here. u have such a great talent. please keep up the good work!~~
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Thanks hun for the comments on my poems! Well I'll ttyl. Hope your summer is going good. Much love,
Muah
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Whoa lol. I love the phrases you used in this, specifically these few:
"All her scars scream at her, to tear them open once more
To slice her pale skin, to feel the blood flow lazily down her unsteady arm
All their voices swirling in her head, killing this fragile girl,"
"She's full of rage, full of fire deep within her
Empty promises, and painted smiles on the faces of the deceivers confuse her," &
"She hates all the characters in this f*cked up show
Emptiness is all she knows, it's all she feels"
This write is really powerful, and shows the inner angst very well. Amazing job ^.^
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no problem.
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This is very deep and I can relate to some of the feelings that you expressed in this. I could picture some of this in my mind. Nice work and keep it up.
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Thanks for commenting, it was greatly appreciated
Isabel
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This is amazing. I can definetly relate to this. Its really really good. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you FunnelWaxFate for the amazing comment on my poem. It was greatly appreciated, and yes it did make sense lol. Thanks again...
Isabel
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Fantastic write. I can really relate to this. Great insight and you capture human nature, in such a situation, absolutely perfectly (if that makes any sence...). Fantastic imagery and strong emotion, really, it is a brilliant read. Well done!
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