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Light

Love is embodied in the stillness of the evening.
In darkness there is only light, like dancing fireflies.
For those who find it, in silence is deepest fellowship;
the serenity of the stars resounding in the soul.
A thing so frail - so unshakable - trapping the heart.
Setting it free.

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My boyfriend wrote this for me...Yea. he's great. I just wanted to see your input on this...
Written June 23rd, 2006

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  • Time focus on Me
    July 4, 2006
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    U got it going on wit this poem keep up the marvelous work dat u do Bravo wit this poem u expressed so well and written out u done it way to go bravo awesome job keep da ink flowin ya got some hot talent way to go bravo once again Babygirl


  • NyteShade
    June 23, 2006
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    This poem is so sweet and cute, i don't usually comment on love poems but i love this one.