We were born from porn, dirty, horny sex is in the blood
like Christie & the Suspect when we wrestle in the mud
Expect sex to be the best 11 grand and 77 seconds
of intense impressive sex, the length is extensive
the direct lesson is, I can be stressin' sexual tension
that I mention, immense erection, aimed in your direction
I reckon, we both wet, we both know it isn't just sweat
Gasp as fast as an orgasm, I won't let ya forget yet
I must admit, my tactic is active on ass and massive tits
add dick, you add tits, adjective is you have an adequate clit
Like the split beneath your hips, a slit wrist, I lick the slit
fuzzy peach is ripe & it's like a mic, I'm quick to spit
I choose to abuse you, cruise through before I'm out
eating out, used to pussy juice as I pour it in your mouth
You choke tongue with a pubic noose, pussy seduces
with juices marinating a rude kiss, juice is no nuisance
Yo, all I gotta do is, use it like music just to do it
spit fluid to fluent to you moving to boob movement
if you do this, the fluid just, rushes when I bust
a nut through it, while screwing with too few tubes of lubricant
Baby maybe I love ya,
which just might give me the right to plug ya
Lady be a friend & lend a cunt ta, just rub ya the wrong way
all day, cuff ya, equalizers say, work accomodates play
fuck ya, bump the lust, fuck the trust, I must obey
because my sensation stage still rages through my veins, ok?
pervert works the words as you serve a felatio tray
they make me go crazy, fuck often 'till I'm so lazy
You still on the pill, I got condoms, no baby
Oh baby, yo lady, yo tastey and instead of safety
open up those mother fucking legs and rape me
You grip my dick and quickly stick it to your pussy lips
we fuck, fuck the blood, 'cause we simple similes to wussy crips
I'm tickling clit, nibbling shifty nipples sticking to the tits
that's what you get during one of Suicide Suspect's sex spits
Expect it, I'm still erect & often fondlin' boobies
then like a bomb it drops on me, an idea to see ya booty
Excuse me, I hear they don't feel the same to me
I recommend you bend over so I know to poke you anally
no it's ok, think pleasurely/painfully
I'm your ass assasin, I took a blast in your ass &
have you tied up in bondage with me in a mask &
you told me to put it in your ass, I wasn't askin'
cum in your bum, nut in your butt, I started laughin'
Next generation starts with sex and penetration
Expect invitations to sensation temptation elevation
Entertainment, when I cum, I'm aiming for your anus
lable you a 'Back-Door Whore', bitch I'll make ya famous
I like that dancing aiming at me, shaking that fanny
I know I can see, Christie's snow white in those black panties
What's up C-cup? although ya know I'm just joking you
It's seriously hot watching tips of nipples poking through
I'm hoping you, are as wet as that T-shirt
I'm about to burst and what's worse is it's making me hurt
ladies first, rape me worse than Bundy's bitches in the dirt
You love to suck up premature cum when I begin to squirt
I win the fued, as we fight for positions you wanna be in
You on a mission to be sittin' on me, I wanna see skin
You leapin' on me, I'm the zombie like I'm sleepin'
Rip off the bra, to suck on soft tits like I be teethin'
You weapin', cuz it hurts when I creep in it deep &
you please me these week-ends, my knees are feelin' kind of weak then
Cease your speakin', being speechless is your fine quality
I'm an oddity, showing you freak shit, bitch it's all of me
About now I pronounce I'm all about that pussy pounce
and whip out those tits, I wanna see them tits bounce
in any case, with that twat, ass & face, what I'll do to you
will make you so wet, I'll slip, break a hip, then sue you
I gotta boo boo, and you got boobs ooohhhh, I kiss them better
wish them better, and gently press them and your chest together
You be quick to lick the dick, quick to lick up my spit
don't swallow my shit, it's the only way you'll spit like this
Why diss? kiss my grits but you a mad fan of me
I will still kill ya to fulfill my necrophilia fantasy
You're in shape and about to get date raped, you hottie
Duct taped, but fucked safe with your entire nude body
You've got me hot, and this time I rhyme alot, see?
I take advantage as if you were a Jew and I'm a Nazi
I like how you asked me to react & act nasty
and that song dispatching from tits clapping is kind of catchy
Bitch, our hips collide, that's mature pussy, my dick hides
this chick rides, pussy pushing my dick even deeper inside
I win pride, as I cum in between some thin thighs
wet pink pussy makes it easier for our skin to slide
she begins to cry, and moan like stars of porn shown
...she still cries like a little 'bitch' begging for the 'bone'
Ya know with my flow, I seem to stream the wet into your dreams
with an attitude to gag you, so no one can hear your screams
just shut the fuck up, or get butt fucked, you love it rough
the way your cunt's touched, must just fucking love it so much
I have your cunt stuffed, with appealing flow, feel the cum rush
in the name of ummm? lust, you must love the cum when I bust
and just, rushing stuff up your bum is just a must
I'm dumb, but I must bust in your butt, fuck I trust
that you're kinky, I'm thinking, I'll get my dinky stinky
it's one-eye will wink, I'm still sinking into pussy pinky
She's spread, as I spread a hat over my head
I'm behind her, reminder, she's bent over the bed
she opens it, opens lips, I'm scoping clit as her tits hang
Insane, I quickly stick her clit to the tip of my wang
I abuse her every hole, like I'm a dog-piled gang
she likes it like that, she loves that doggy style bang
...She wants it harder
...she wants it in farther
meanwhile, I want to shave her pubes just like a barber
it's itchy, hey maybe that's why she's kind of bitchy
when she isn't with me, the attention isn't on her titties
I'm pulling in & out, and I doubt you wouldn't know
what I'm about, when I rhyme In & Out with REIN/RAUS
Right now, I'm the spouse, understand the man of that house
that's how I rip that pussy, like I ripped off that blouse
she scratched me, like how she's scratching these sheets
her cunt's a starving pussy, still attacking my meat
I'm beat, like the muscles of my tongue when I eat
I rhyme sweet, like when she turns tricks for the treats
She's like a street ho, easy flow, plus she knows it first
I'm the foe who rhymes & flows, like my hose who knows to squirt
chose beserk squirt, this ho's a 'fucking pro' who chose to jerk
befo' we fuck so much it hurts, befo' we roam the road to work
Author notes
Written June 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Seduce me by im dead - go away.
460 points, ended December 29, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Shit. I Come Back && This IS All You've Got??? Just Kidding. No Actually This Was Fuckin' Awesome. Really Liked I'll Probably Read More Than Once.
♥Ellie -
sticky
oOoOoh thats the hottness right there!!!
face flushed, red with color
suspect rushed and forgot he was fucking a mother
it's hot when you spray it, u spit it, u hit it
don't delay it - u want it, you got it
i'm wet from that hot spit
wooohweeee u got me
but wtf is christie? lol...
try usin CHRISSY maybe that will suffice me
then trace my body while you ice me
it's nice and perks my nipples the right way
and i know you like to fight this way
like you makin' wishes just to obey
like snoop n dre' we gettin' high (offa sex)
like everyyyy-dayyyy~~~
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thats the longest rhyme ive read that i accually enjoyed. very descriptive. you make me want sex now. gee thanks.
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I enjoyed it quite alot. Thanks for the insite to a male brain lol ... i would love to see the female's side to this romp before work.. would be very interesting. Great write!
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hey i love the write its great very detailed in some ways a little to much detain this write is very different well best wishes to you and your writing
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tigger -
well done
Well ....hmmm. interesting piece. I too found parts of it WOW WOW WOW but parts that made me uncomfy but i do say. this was a very heated, lustysexy wild and woooaaa man. This wonderfully penned with like i said some parts that well seem to hurt the woman for sexual pleasure. To an extent thats great but wooa man this was like wooaa. Ok Wont comment anymroe on that lol. Very well written descriptive and definately very detailed, left nothing to the imagination. Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you. Keep penning for i loved the flow of this. great pattern. Thanks again
Victoria -
whoa dang. i dont even know what to say. AMAZING! i agree with painstricken though. there are some parts that do make me uncomfortable. but other than those small details, this was great. like an orgasm almost. the words and your imagery. its like you're living it in as you read it! great job!
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To be honest I don't know what to say. It was very visual with all the detail which is very good. There were parts that I fucking loved! But then there were parts that seemed more about physically hurting a female for a man to get his pleasure. Those parts I didn't care for. I don't know I feel confused with this piece. It makes me wonder if this is how guys think about sex all the time. Some parts are good but others just made me feel uncomfortable. Don't get me wrong this is a good writing altogether. I'm just giving you my personal take on it.
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HOOOOTTTT
"I win the fued, as we fight for positions you wanna be " thats my favorite line... I connect with the whole poem and you kept it interesting. A great job for a erotica. Also I like that line because me and my fiance are always "fighting" over who gets to do certain positions.. Now we just have "hostel" take-overs.I enjoyed it a lot. Very HOT.... i might have to go take a shower, then read part one....great job. you should check out my erotic poems sometime...
XxBlessedRainxX -
um.... ok... this is more erotic then i thought it would be... This is very um detailed... LOL... Great job on this though!!! I'm glad it was featured... LOL
Beth -
this was a bit long for me. I quite like quickies..He He He... It was good though with a LOT going on
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This was unbelievably energetic and sexual, sexy, wild, brazen, the whole nine yards. Like a video. Almost too much, but not quite.
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Yeah an orgy is right!
Very wild and sexual
indeed. It was like
being there.
You captured it
very well.
Jeannie D Hunter
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goooood
holy shit. this was like a huge massive orgy. yeah total turn on. good job dude! we oughta fuck sometime, i'm jk, but not really all at the same time. you did a great job. i really enjoyed the detail you put into it. it helped the reader feel the sensation and satisfaction you left on the page. you must really enjoy sex. you express it really well. you oughta write me an erotic sex story, i think you'd be able to make a very juicy one. you have potential, i like that. keep it up hun. ♥ i look forward to reading your other pieces. -
I had sex once. It was in a bedroom, we tried all the good positions, like normal, on top and doggy. Wow, that whole evening really blew my socks off. But then I got syphilis and it was no laughing matter.
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