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Fake Love

So, this is what I get
From empty promises-
Arms full of nothing
And she'll get the same

She hasn't realized yet
What a fake he is
How he cheats and he lies
And covers the truth

All he wants is the sex
He doesn't see
That we girls are people
Not meat to inspect

My broken heart aches
But not only for me
It hurts for her too
And the other three

We all know the pain
Of falling for him
How he cheats and he lies
And our world is left dim

As his fake love flies
To the next poor, blind sucker
Who will fall for his lies.

Author notes

Hmph.

Option 4.
Written June 23rd, 2006

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  • deleteduser
    May 28, 2007

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    Rightful tears my friend. The picture background and the poem together draws together a sad effect on the reader


  • lover and hater
    July 11, 2006
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    this is a great poem its very nicev good luck