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I care






 Listen to the world,
   feel the vibrations,
    know the sounds of truth,
     don't ever die in the silence that remains.

 
 Always look for more,
   bigger and bigger things,
    greater images to steal,
       in a heaven of a never ending road.

 Take nothing for granted,
   not even something so small,
    like the hands that guide us,
      when we begin to fall.


 Walk on through to that light,
   so bright and right,
    cleansing your sin,
     and dipping you back into the evil world,
       yet once again.

 
 

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Written June 23rd, 2006

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  • straighttalker gold member
    August 20, 2006
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    excellent

    This poem shows something in your heart, that inspite of the cynicism of life, shows it's true - you do care!


  • Goddess of illusion
    August 19, 2006
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    This was truly a great write... I loved it... Keep it up


  • LILbabyG
    June 23, 2006
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    Well I like this poem its not so open but it has something there great poem and really good writing!!!