Bleeding through my tears.
Trying to hid my fears
waking from a dream
never knowing his scheme
motives, lies, and deception
his every move ruining my perception
hiding the pain behind a mask
behind the fears, a difficult task
searching for a sense of being
finding the past and finally seeing
trying to hide the damage
there's only so much one can manage
Hiding the wall of fears
everything isn't as it appears
Author notes
Just wrote this.. don't know if the title really fits though.. if you know of a better one let me know
Written June 23rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Wanted All Trophyless Poets!! by Tali28.
300 points, ended July 18, 2006, 67 entries
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Great poem. Very emotional. Love the details and imagery. The rhyme scheme is simple, but very effective. Thank you for entering this great poem in my contest. Good luck and keep up the great writes. ttyl Tali
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wow...all I can say is wow. Truly awesome work! A very powerful piece indeed!
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Great piece. The title can fit in I think, in a way it could if you think about it. Very catchy. i really like this. Great job
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this poem is so effecting. It embraces my soul. I'll never forget this poem. I love it. Right more poems like this one and you shall succeed.
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i love the poem! though you are right the title could be better but you write really well its very effective...
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