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Could Have

Could Have--

I could have sat with you til morning.
I could have sat with you til dawn-
Just sitting with you speaking
Dreams and whisper-singing songs.

I could have waited for the music
To beat within my heart-
And then I'd take you in my arms
And we'd dance and never stop.

I could have told you that I loved you,
With words I've never used before
I could have thrown away my stupid pride,
And fought your wish to go.

I could have followed when you left me,
But I stood still in my spot...
And now all I am left with
Are the could haves in my heart

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Written June 20th, 2006

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  • Shattered Remains
    October 14, 2008

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    Very nice, I like it, sucha simple idea, but yet it gives the poem so mcuh meaning.. Thank you for entering