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Cherished Memories of Dad

The funny songs you sang to me
when I was just a kid
of silly roosters laying eggs
and when the pigs had hid,
have visited my mind once more
and caused my heart to feel
the joy of our emotions shared
so merrily and real.

I see your eyes all-bulging out
as only yours could do
when singing higher then allowed,
a second octave too!
Your hands would start their own fast walk
though calloused as they were
would tickle with the softest touch,
which laughter would reward.

If truth were told I’m feeling old
and missing you a bunch,
I realized how long it’s been
just sometime after lunch.
I saw a dad with little girl
a bouncing ‘Pon his knee,
and heard her peels of laughter from
the funny songs you sang to me.







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option 5-The funny songs you sang

Written June 22nd, 2006

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  • Frozentearz
    July 3, 2006
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    OOh this was truly a delight.
    congratulations on your award
    I could hear the song through your imagery of words
    well done.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    July 3, 2006
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    hehehe, wasn't it a great song, and the sound effects brought such delight to little ones! Thanks for your great thoughts, I'm glad it made you smile

    Have a blessed day Sandi


  • Samplette gold member
    July 2, 2006
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    My daddy sang to me about the little rooster all the time...

    Had a little rooster by the barnyard gate,
    That little rooster was my playmate,
    That little rooster went cock-a-doodle-doo,
    Dee-doodle-dee, doodle-dee, doodle-dee-doo.

    Had a little cat by the barnyard gate,
    That little cat was my playmate,
    That little cat went meow, meow, meow
    That little rooster went cock-a-doodle-doo,
    Dee-doodle-dee, doodle-dee, doodle-dee-doo.

    Had a little dog by the barnyard gate,
    That little dog was my playmate,
    That little dog went arf, arf, arf,
    That little cat went meow, meow, meow
    That little rooster went cock-a-doodle-doo,
    Dee-doodle-dee, doodle-dee, doodle-dee-doo.

    Had a little duck by the barnyard gate,
    That little duck was my playmate,
    That little duck went quack, quack, quack,
    That little dog went arf, arf, arf,
    That little cat went meow, meow, meow
    That little rooster went cock-a-doodle-doo,
    Dee-doodle-dee, doodle-dee, doodle-dee-doo.

    Had a little pig by the barnyard gate,
    That little pig was my playmate,
    That little pig went oink, oink, oink,
    That little duck went quack, quack, quack,
    That little dog went arf, arf, arf,
    That little cat went meow, meow, meow
    That little rooster went cock-a-doodle-doo,
    Dee-doodle-dee, doodle-dee, doodle-dee-doo.

    Had a little sheep by the barnyard gate,
    That little sheep was my playmate,
    That little sheep went baa, baa, baa,
    That little pig went oink, oink, oink,
    That little duck went quack, quack, quack,
    That little dog went arf, arf, arf,
    That little cat went meow, meow, meow
    That little rooster went cock-a-doodle-doo,
    Dee-doodle-dee, doodle-dee, doodle-dee-doo.

    Had a little cow by the barnyard gate,
    That little cow was my playmate,
    That little cow went moo, moo, moo,
    That little sheep went baa, baa, baa,
    That little pig went oink, oink, oink,
    That little duck went quack, quack, quack,
    That little dog went arf, arf, arf,
    That little cat went meow, meow, meow
    That little rooster went cock-a-doodle-doo,
    Dee-doodle-dee, doodle-dee, doodle-dee-doo.



    lol....thanks for the smile....and for entering the contest.
    Edited on Jul 02, 12:45 because ''.


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    June 24, 2006
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    Sam, I'd like to think everyone has had at least one person in their life that added the special moments that last a life time, I consider myself very blessed that mine was my dad..and a few others as well Thank you so much for your continued support of my work, I truly appreciate you!

    Many blessings Sandi


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    June 23, 2006
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    Beautiful!

    Aww this is such a sweet touching loving caring beautifully weritten and inked poem I have rea din quite some time. you inspire us all with this very beautiful poetry produced by you. excellent ork all round and Good Luck Paul


  • wtchr
    June 23, 2006
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    Your poem brings back memories of two very special people (to me), my dad and my grandfather (mom's side). Both were simple men, both had tremendous compassion and humor. Many lines in your poem could be about them... maybe they are. Maybe these kinds of people touch us all. I like that thought. Thank you.


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    June 23, 2006
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    Hiya Legend, Thank you so much for your continued support of my scribbles, I truly appreciate you my friend I wish I could blast them out daily, heck I'd be happy with weekly at this point but that fishing hole still hasn't dried up and life is just too hectic, but I can still hope!

    Have a fantastic weekend! Blessings Sandi


  • Legend silver member
    June 23, 2006
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    Sandi you post far to infrequent for this reader.This is a wonderful piece and one that will strike a cord with so many of the readers.As always your rhyme is wonderful and the piece as always flows along so smooth All the best in this contest


  • Prince Charming
    June 22, 2006
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    Some things are magical moments that we will never forget. I love the sweetness in this... the trip back on memory lane. Through your words and the stories you have told en tell every once in a while... I learn to know the man that i have never and will never met. The eternal love from a daughter to her dad.. the most precious one.
    I am glad you write again and your muse takes you on his flight. You brought a big smile on my face so late this night. A big kiss from me little angel. Good luck in the contest Your Prince

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