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Stuck (stupid)

One of the advices given
Is to change my point of view
But giving persons don't know
How my eyes are stuck in my head

My head is on the table
Tired of another boring day
I can't keep it up
To see things from another side

My eyes, like stones
Are stuck in my head
Unable to move them
I'll be stuck in my self pity

Forever

Author notes

dooooooh, this is dumb.
Written June 22nd, 2006

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  • -Lost Words-
    June 22, 2006
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    thanks..

  • Volst Conundrum
    June 22, 2006
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    maybe for others...maybe as a poem..but for me..i can read throu it.....i dont know....but i like it...the imagery appeals to me....and it does feel good..i like..perhaps the poetess doesnt...perhaps no1 else does..

    but i like it..