Surrounded by a crush of love,
Within the calm of starless night,
From our minds; where dreams are found to come,
Mine are filled of that special one.
-Taken in sleep-
Amongst the flight of hope
Vanished of tears and pain
Our wings spread; to fly somewhere far.
Through the clouds -
Above the sky, over the stars,
And beyond the moon;
To an enchanted place,
Where, dreams come true.
For you and I,
In the midst of ocean breeze
And golden shine
Just before purple haze
We walk the earth
With, hand in hand.
A come to stop just at shore
A breath of gentle air I’ve taken in,
A smile comes, while looking at you
Mesmerized;
I look deep into your hazel eyes,
Where a mystery of you and I, I wish to solve.
is put out of sight –
As I touch your skin, you grasp me tight,
Taking my lips against your own
Passionately tasting me
As my dreams come true
Just before the thunderstorm,
I’ve waken again
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Written June 22nd, 2006
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This is so beautiful and passionate and it's obvious this come from the heart. Anyone can sit down and write a poem in five minutes or less but this took some deep thinking and true talent to conjure up. Poetry, I believe, is the language of our hearts, not our mouths. You have to feel it before you can put it into words, and my friend, you have done just that. Great job, and it's nice to see someone writing around here. Now if only I can find some deep inspiration...
~Joolz~ -
this was really somethin special.. and so wonderfully written.. i like the form... it was like nothing ive ever read on ap before and i love it...
For you and I,
In the midst of ocean breeze
And golden shine
Just before purple haze
We walk the earth
With, hand in hand.
A come to stop just at shore
A breath of gentle air I’ve taken in,
A smile comes, while looking at you
Mesmerized;
this was my fav part although it was hard to pick out my fav lines cus you used your words so well here... i just simply fell in love with how you worded these lines especially... great job... good to see you writting more... take care...
DreamR -
Joshua....good to see you posting again. This is a fantastic poem...full of wonderful emotion and imagery. You have shared a masterpiece here..and I am proud to call you my AP SON!
I hope you are well. Life has been busy for me..but I still think of you often....sorry I have not been around much for you.
HUGS
LIZ
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