I took a walk on the rocks and left bloody footprints in the dust
But the sting was worth getting away from a beach of cigarette butts
I rediscovered drinking's worth when I dropped my lighter in the surf
That's where I left the vices; they won't bring me back to where you are
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Written June 21st, 2006
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Thought Provoking
Certainly original, I'm not sure how the title fits in
So...you gave up smoking for drinking? Nice reflective piece. An enjoyable read.
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This was different. I liked it though. I like the fact that you supposedly dropped your lighter. I wish my mom would be able to drop that, and the ciggs. That let alone the habit. I like it.
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Nice piece, loved the introspection. Great write. keep your pen forever flowing,
Bunny
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